SamuraiArtGuy says: Well... Um... DANG. Well, I didn't stick it out for years or anything. I came across the story and plowed through it in one night in one sitting. Pretty compelling and it felt very true to life. The way people actually behaved. I would have hoped for a more compelling ending, a more classic literary sense of closure or transition, but as you said, you're "not that kind of writer." And owning your work means you can write what you bloody please. Mu one tiny (frakkin' not-picky) criticism is that the character designs made ALMOST too much a shift on the art change up, so there was almost a sense of discontinuity to the storyline. (Think Robin Curtis vs Kristie Alley) But then the characters "voices" reasserted themselves. As a professional creative - process is always interesting to me. As a comics and SF fan, a good story always attracts me. Well done! I enjoyed the trip!